Viperfish

• Artist: 290DarkStars
• Description:
  A Hiku at the begginin' and one at the end.
  I wrote this feeling like my sins where chasing me,
  persuing me like the coward that I am.
  But...err....yah, so I wrote another poem.
  Enjoy everyone, including my, like, one fan.
  
• Date: 03/30/2009
• Tags: viperfish

Viperfish are strong.
Fast to devour their prey,
viperfish are deep.

Darting through the deep,
the viperfish screams.
Not one to climb the steep,
but it's not in my dreams.

The viperfish, my pursuer,
smoothly he wiggles to swim.
I know, to this day, I am a doer,
but I can't, I can't outrun him.

To kill and eat,
that's his one and only will.
He hungers for meat,
unfortunately I am his kill.

Out of the darkness.
It comes to prey on my bones,
the viperfish screams.

Comments

[1so_so11rry_ari11]

bravo once more ^_^
omgesus i hope i didn't say awesome in any of my comments because i just realized thats an annoying/gay/cliche word xD listen.... "THIS POEM WAS AWESOME" =.= so 1990's u know? but anyways... just ot annoy the crap out of me...."THIS POEM IS AWESOME" xD

[Daddy Got This Account]

man dude. thats awesome. i really enjoyed reading it start to finish.you really did a good job portraying emotion to me through this piece. man, Dark, "To kill and eat,
that's his one and only will.
He hungers for meat,
unfortunately I am his kill."
thats my favorite stanza. gosh, that just really jumps out to me. dont ask why. XD i dont know, i just like it. well, you should write a new poem sometime. ive been waiting to see, "290DarkStars- 67 submissions" lol. i really like it, wonderful

[Senpai Darling]

I didn't care for it at first but it really grows on you as you read it.

[Valoralin]

well u have a new fan now. This is really cool deep with ur words and strong with the idea. I can see u running from it but I think if u just turn and face it it will be the one running from u. Well keep up the good work. ^_^

[Buttercup Veela]

u dont have LIKE only 1 fan! im ur fan and i think ur girlfriend is ur fan and ur so awesome at writing that u have so many fans (unlike me, i have 1, u) and y r u a coward?! i like the haikus. they r very effective. wow. thats wat i say a lot. wow. biggrin