Do you notice me?

• Artist: Save-My-Day
• Description: Comment pls of course after you read
• Date: 04/01/2009
• Tags: notice blood popularity

I see you but do you notice me
Walking down the halls so vivid and free
Who am kidding I'm a lonely shell
Teetering on the edge until I finally fell

I hated you so popular and outgoing
But you didnt know on the floor my blood was flowing
Live by myself please just reach out your hand
So I can stand from this floor filled with lies and sand

I see you but do you notice me
A lonely shell if what I use to be
Who am I kidding I was always this way
Trapped between two walls in a garden to sway

Comments

[Bakeya]

**lot

[Bakeya]

Mine is called Put It on a Scale. Please read and comment it would mean a lit. Its a true story about anorexia. Also, ur poem is good but dont force urself to make suicidal references. Even if ur not suicidal it doesn't mean the pain isn't as real

[iiFruitLoop]

read My Peom Its Blessed Easter

Good Poem

[AquaDuelist]

omg poetry doesnt depend only on rhyme!every poem i saw till now had rhyme!

[Hot pink Killer07]

If your confident he/she will notice you dont show them that your weak