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• Artist: dontwannaberight
• Description: wrote this about 10 min ago haha so i decided 2 c wat ppl think of it
  i dont think its done yet, ill probably add more l8r
  leave comments!
  ;)
  
  *constructive criticism plz :D*
• Date: 04/02/2009
• Tags: untitled dontwannaberight poetryandlyrics

The sentence that he said
keeps on playing
round and round
through out my head

And so I sit here all alone
ontemplating what to say
All my phrases are outgrown
All my words just fade away

Why should I care
when your just going to pull
words right out of thin air
They are so simple

You are such a fake
I dont even know why
I keep making the same mistake
Im just wasting my time

Comments

[The Time Wanderer]

nice, mesa likes it 5/5

[dontwannaberight]

my computers being retarted and wont let me edit it
but the part in the second paragraph where it says ontemplating should b contemplating haha