snow

• Artist: nishi1
• Description: These are my ideas about snow.
• Date: 04/06/2009
• Tags: snow

Snow is thread,
that makes a blanket of white.

Under the moon,
snow glows like a light.

Snow can be good,
snow can be bad.

Sometimes the cold,
can make you real mad.

I hate the snow,
I hate it a lot.

But as for some of you,
maybe not.

Comments

[Jarmis]

For how simple it is, it's surprisingly good. It drops off toward the end, though... More stuff like the blanket of white line would be nice.