Poem: Whispered Words

• Artist: Hidden Shadow Love
• Description: A poem I wrote after my crush said, "I don't like her." It's several months old now, but I think it well written. Short, but full of meaning. Please comment and tell me what you think.
• Date: 04/08/2009
• Tags: poem whispered words

He said it,
He said the words I fear
He said the words I didn't want to hear.

"I don't like her!"
Words I overhear,
Words pronounced loud and clear.

I bit my lip, unsure,
Was this a moment of denial,
Or that of truth?

He said it,
I hate the words I hear,
Oh, he said the words
That I wish weren't
Whispered in my ears.

Comments

[QUEEN_ OF_EVRIITHIN]

wow, thts really deep n ur very talented. buti am a lil confuesd wit the phrase wen u said "idontlike her" so like is he refering to u bc he "Wispered it in yur ear" i think for this poem u have to really think aboout to understand it but good job! i enoyed it =]