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As days go by, and time flies by,
I suddenly get the notion
That my soul is filled with all
this bottled up emotion
I turn my head and look away
just keeping it all in
I tell myself it's all ok.
is it perhaps a sin?
To absorb it all, like a sponge
never let it out
I'm in a fog, I'm in a daze
It makes me want to shout
I'm like a sponge!... I feel it here,
right inside my head...
I'm pretty sure I'll be secure
once it's all been said...
- Title: Sponge...
- Artist: Rosmarino
- Description: Just wrote down some thoughts/emotions....
- Date: 04/09/2009
- Tags: sponge
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 04/18/2009
- Not bad. work on it and it could be great. I recommend using a bit more vivid wording. 3/5.
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