- the tree again here again i am at thats tree a don't know why but day by day here i go i not know know why but again i am here at this tree there is some thing abou it i don't know why but here at this tree i feel safe os i guess thats why day in and day out i'm here at the tree that i see that i feel
- Title: the tree
- Artist: fufhff4
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- Date: 04/10/2009
- Tags: tree
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- alice11faerydust - 07/07/2009
- loves master 44, i don't think you understood the scheme of the poem... the use of the same phrases adds to the fact that the person in the poem keeps going back to the tree over and over again. It's brilliantly composed!
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- Primrose Petals - 04/12/2009
- This is really horrible a 5 year old could have written something a little better stop using the same words over and over 0/5
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- fufhff4 - 04/10/2009
- i hope some one likes it ^-^
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