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A Hitchhiker In Hades
by UC Poika
her eyes become lakes
as streams run down her face
her hair ablaze above
in the shimmering sun
burns her firecracker skin
and her smoldering scalp
where the dazzling haze
puddles in the highways.
as the blacktop kettles her legs
and the grasses and the ditches sag
leaving leaves clinging but limp
to too hot trunks, boughs and limbs
drooping in the high degrees
slighted by the still breezes
where sweat filled sneakers
long for sun dried bleachers
like wet backed hikers all swear
their thumbs in the air.
as no cars crossed her heart
only crickets then to be heard
the deserted hiker virtually topless
where deer flies in triplets
bit her brightened red hairs
cried out as yet not aware
of the odors and the smell
since she really is, all by herself, in hell!
- Title: A Hitchhiker In Hades
- Artist: UC Poika
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Description:
Stranded in the middle of nowhere
that turns out to be hell - Date: 04/22/2009
- Tags: hitchhiker hell
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Poll Whore Option. - 04/22/2009
- That was pretty cool, and it was fun to read. I thought it sorta puttered out near the end, when you started mentioning cars (And I know it's about a hitchhiker, but it still kinda lost me xDD), but overall it was pretty good. =3
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