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Will You Come Home?
Through the clouds you shine to me.
Like a burning wall of flames.
Through the tears you smile at me.
Like the light of my day.
Through my pain you comfort me.
When I've been kicked to many times.
Through my nightmares you hold me close.
Like a worried father at night.
Throught the days you carry me through.
Like a daddy's baby girl.
Through my sorrow you kiss me lightly.
Like rays of light touching my skin.
Those days were wonderful.
Like a wonderful newborn.
Those days have passed.
Like a slight breeze.
You were there and never left.
Like lovebugs stuck together.
We were in love, but you didn't take it seriously.
Like a immature little kid.
You're faking drove me insane.
But still I held on.
I thought it would last.
Like a wonderful summer.
You threw me harshly around.
Like the wind blowing leaves.
I still tried to hold on with everything I had.
But you tore it out.
My poor heart.
It's gone.
In your poweful hands.
That you once held me in.
Where did you go?
What happened to you?
Will you come back?
Are you gone forever?
With my one and only heart?
My sobs are broken again..
Will you come home again?...
- by Redorepellant Lubricant |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/29/2009 |
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- Title: Will You Come Home?
- Artist: Redorepellant Lubricant
- Description: This is a poem about a love that was somewhat near and dear to a sweet girl, which the guy didn't take seriously. He then ripped her apart, and left her. Wondering.
- Date: 04/29/2009
- Tags: will come home
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Comments (5 Comments)
- XxroseXredxX - 10/19/2011
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This is a really strong poem. I agree about the text color, I think the two different fonts was a good idea. I like the way it looks that way.
Also, just some spelling and grammar checks.
Other than that, very good job. Keep it up smile
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- FuriazFTW - 05/04/2009
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Very touching! Although I think it would have been better without the neon-blue and white text, it was a very heartfelt poem. You employed metaphors, imagery and symbolism, all of which were used very effectively.
Definitely a 4/5! Keep up the good work!
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- persinomm - 05/03/2009
- how sweet.
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- Caesura Caelum - 04/29/2009
- wow... this is really touching.... wonderfull.... keep up the good work with making great poems, but i do hope things work out for you, at least better then they did form me...
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