not the same

• Artist: ZimJordanJ
• Description: drank alot of monsters and i got really low and my hands did the work for me :Dps im not emo, i just felt like hating the world atm
• Date: 05/01/2009
• Tags: dark brooding

bestricken, this humanity
evil filled with atrocity
carnage, lust, and fear
won't anyone shed a tear,
for a child left to die
young girls left to cry,
slavery runs abound
no haven yet found

swirling thoughts so disgusting
never to be trusting,
things left unsaid
now so many dead,
all morality was dashed
iron shackles were cast,
what foul intention
cause mankinds invention?

Comments

[ZimJordanJ]

:p i forget why i even wrote this lol! oweels i still think its my best poem ever lulz

[Goddess SpiritWolf]

Wow, i didn't know you wrote peotry (see how much i know about friends, lol). this is really good! And as RavenaRayne said below me, it's not that emo. I seen emo poems....they are depressing.....lol

^_^

[RavenaRayne]

Monsters do amazing things, don't they? XD I was listening to metal as I read this, and it kicked some major A double S! The rhyming and word usage were great

[Judge Master Jib]

giggity giggity biggrin read this, because i said so biggrin

[Moonlight_Maiden123]

cool and its not that emo, trust me i heard a lot more depressing stare , but yea nice good job ^^