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Why waste your breathe on somthing that can kill you. You waste precious time with your life and send money just for the one Puff that can give you heart and lung cancer and your family will be so depressed that your gone....Can't see yourself. You say your going to Quit, But your not cause your addicted to tabacco. You say you don't want to die so young, But it might already be...to..LATE....Cause you are already....DEAD!!
- by Frizzy Zombie |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/06/2009 |
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- Title: Why waste your life...
- Artist: Frizzy Zombie
- Description: I don't want anyone to die from tabacco products....It's way to DEPRESSING!!!!
- Date: 05/06/2009
- Tags: waste your life
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- Penultimate Penance - 03/01/2014
- There are spelling, and punctual mistakes. Proper English or any language for that - is important, to create the best poetry. Always re-read what you type or write before you post it.
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- Lola stelladora - 05/13/2009
- This poem is very good. U had it all and i understood what u were saying. Grammer was there and u used ur literary devices beautifully. Continue to write so i can read.
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