i cry

• Artist: bunnys_rule1
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• Date: 05/24/2009
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I cry for the time that you were almost mine, I cry for the memories I've left behind, I cry for the pain, the lost, the old the new, I cry for the times I thought I had you

Comments

[AyyTown]

so good i like the last sentence
"I cry for the times I thought I had you"
good job

[Idiosyncratic Quirk]

Poorly written: bad punctuation and no literary appeal.