The Darkness of the Seas

• Artist: pickyzel
• Description: My most favorite poem i have ever written and would love to share with you.
• Date: 05/25/2009
• Tags: darkness seas

Through the Darkness of the seas
I wish to see your face
The rain falls like an acid force
In this Dreadful place

I dream of you every night
Through and through again
I see the image you gave to me
Because the pain will never end

Comments

[Mugentsuki]

Ugh. I am sick of reading these super-short poems. You have a very good start, but add to it. 4/5 because it isn't enough, but with more added, keeping it as good as it is now, you'll get a five from me.