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Sorry I'm concerned about your problems
Sorry I want to hear about your day
Sorry that I couldn't stop you
I can't keep all of these monsters at bay
- by Ellectric Eccentric |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/29/2009 |
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- Title: Sorry
- Artist: Ellectric Eccentric
- Description: a silly poem about rejection =P
- Date: 05/29/2009
- Tags: sorry
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Ellectric Eccentric - 05/30/2009
- Thank you OericireO!
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- 0ericire0 - 05/30/2009
- It could be taken in a mass of different ways, and the way I happened to take it had a slightly more humorous light than other readers. I will give it 4 *s
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- Ellectric Eccentric - 05/30/2009
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in other words-----> boring lines that seem to carelessly sloped together. The repetition is bad. Could be written by anyone, and is nothing important in the poetic world.
Thanks for the comment Alitare! smile - Report As Spam
- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 05/30/2009
- Banal forced rhyme scheme that requires little to no thought. The overall theme is a trite adage, and the repetition is facile and weak. Could be written in seconds, and has no real lasting use in the mass and bloated realm of poetics.
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