Her Pain

• Artist: Twizted_Trixta
• Description:
• Date: 05/30/2009
• Tags: pain

I watch her there,
beauty beyond comprehension.
A smile on my face,
for she is mine.
But beneath the beauty,
I see a pain i cannot lessen.
A past that haunts her,
unable to let go.
My want to help,
to get her to see the love I cannot seem to show.
The urge to make the haunting stop,
to make her past something she will no longer have to bear alone.
I watch her there,
beauty beyond comprehension.
Beauty shown in vain..
Beauty shown...... To hide the pain...

Comments

[Lethal Belgian]

nicely done coment and vote back?
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=101958757#title

[wallawallag]

exact same situation for me.....

[Gurly_4_now]

Woah! This is amazing!
It reminds me of a book I read called 'Identical' and this poem makes me think about the boyfriend of the main character.
If this is based on someone you know, well then if you feel like this you are exactly the friend that this girl needs. <3

[-devil_angelic-]

wow...tht reminds me of something

[BatzLove]

thats the best love poem i've read in forever.
man u must really have a heart to love her that much.
i've seen ppl saying they love the other but this is true.

[iiNaynayx3xx]

wow that is a pretty good poem u might just need to re-word some stuff and then it will be a great poem!!!