Painful Love

• Artist: DoubleMintTwins18
• Description: this is to a boy. Tell me what you think. I know its a little long. But, i wrote it just now.. not even a rough copy.
• Date: 06/01/2009
• Tags: painful love

Your painful Love
Its tearing me apart
I am crying for you
You're breaking my heart

You always do this
Almost every day
You break my heart
In almost every way

You hurt me
You play me
i cry every night
if only you could see

You need to leave
get out of my head
so i can live
I feel like im dead

You are breaking my heart
by loving me
how is that possible
how can that be?

You love her too
i can't accept that
you are a player
and sly as a rat

I know i love you
deep down inside
i need you
i cannot abide

You are like a drug
i cannot give away
You can't be with her
with me you can stay

I think i love you
but i don't know for sure
it is my heart
that you need to cure

You have broken it
and you need to repair
by leaving her
you i cannot share

You hurt me
but i still love you
i love your smile
and all the things you do

I love but hate
the things you do and say
but how you talk to me
i love it in every way

You are my other half
that i cannot live without
it is your name
that i want to shout

I love you
but hate you too

Comments

[Skyraa]

haha. Good poem. I kinda know what you mean. One of my poems, Perfect, is based on a similar concept I guess, though It is really different too....anyways, sorry. haha. I tend to ramble. As I was saying, good poem. Mildly repetitive to the point that some parts seem a little...monotonous? ...redundant would be a better word for it actually. Redundance notwithstanding, I love the concept you convey and you did do a very good job. smile Keep it up! XD

[XxDorky_Panda_BoyxX]

Your poems are good i like.