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Clear crystal tears drip down her fragile face.
I want to ask her what's wrong, but she's in another place.
Her world is so broken, the light is all gone.
She turns toward the wall, not wanting to see the dawn.
She slowly gets up and walks toward the mirror.
I'd tell her it's okay, the problems will disapear
But my words get stuck, because her eyes blaze back at me
And it's no longer her I see.
It's me.
- by fancy-painted-boats- |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/06/2009 |
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- Title: The Girl
- Artist: fancy-painted-boats-
- Description: It's a poem I wrote during a difficult time in my life.
- Date: 06/06/2009
- Tags: girl poem sadness
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Comments (7 Comments)
- fancy-painted-boats- - 09/17/2010
- Oh wow, thank you. : )
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- fattycakess - 09/16/2010
- Best poem I have ever read next to AnnaBel Lee.
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- Jun the Black Rose - 07/04/2010
- not bad
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- Rawr Mehh Dinosaur - 11/03/2009
- nice twist at the end 5/5 rate mine back.
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- Onion_peeler99 - 09/14/2009
- Wow. Shocking twist at the end. Cool.
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- Dragons Willow - 06/08/2009
- this is amazing! you've just inspired me to post another of mine that kinda goes with this! thanks! beautifully done by the way...5/5
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- spaztastic-emo - 06/08/2009
- Oohh soo...magesticly wonderful it is! I luv the ending, tis very beautiful poem!
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