My Heart is like Starz

• Artist: Rea Marie-Jade
• Description:
• Date: 06/11/2009
• Tags: heart like starz

My Heart is a Galaxy, you are all the starz
Mercury is my mind, Venus is my Sexuality, Earth is my Future,
Marz is my Passion, burnin red hot like fire.
He is my sun and she is my black hole of a soul.
My Galaxy loves all the Starz,
My heart protects the Starz that truely love the Galaxy back,
Back to all that is P.U.R.E

Comments

[Had It Coming]

I don't know why you changed the words that ended in 's' to 'z' but it's a really cool poem. Also unless P.U.R.E is an abbreviation for something, I think it should be P-U-R-E. 5/5

[Hystario]

wow that is deep. i think u r an amazing poet. keep going.