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• Artist: planthearth1
• Description: I'm kinda new to writing poems and I dont think this one is good at all but my sis is black mailing me into puting this on gaia so here it is . Conment if u think its worth it. If you like it, will you sugest a name. I'm having a hard time deciding. Sorry about my spelling.
  ---------------Planthearth1---------------------
• Date: 06/24/2009
• Tags: love

You flash your smile my way,
only to find I'm not looking,
You wish on a star shine,
And see its just a plane,
You dream of us together,
But wake alone,
You them wonder about what I wonder about,
But you will never know...Unless I tell.

I only cach a glimps of your smile
Cause I'm looking in your eyes,
I wish on a plane, and hope its actulay star,
I dream of us together,
But I wake alone,
I wonder about how you wonder about me,
Because I will allways tell.

--------- Planthearth1-----------

Comments

[The_One_ReBorn]

Name it somthing like together but apart or somthing good effort

[planthearth1]

Apart ... I like that. And Thankyou

[westernsnog]

How about a name like Apart because to me it makes me think of two people who belong together and are just apart or some other word like that...and i think its great and you should always keep writing!

[supersica11]

Was this for that "special someone"? whee

[supersica11]

This is a great poem! 3nodding

[XxGory GordyxX]

Nice...

[planthearth1]

Thanks. I think I will drop the about and use some contrast words.