To The Love Of My Life

• Artist: iCandiMandi
• Description: There is this amazing guy its almost been two years since we started dating and i love him soo this is something to wrote for him!
• Date: 06/29/2009
• Tags: love life

You seem to cheer me up when i fall
I'd never let you go at all
Talk,Talk,Talk it seems like forever
But forever isn't good enough i need you for LIFE!! heart heart heart heart heart




Baby i love you if we left out of eachothers palms i would cry so much i would drop and die!

Comments

[ilypiAdam]

Wow that is so cute if u need anyone to talk to then u have me

[XxFreaky_DragonxX]

Thanks so much babe i give it 10000000/5 biggrin ily

[My_ChEmIcAl_RoMaNcEe 0-0]

it's saddening but great!

[Scourcho]

it was pretty short to give out a reaction to readers
poems don't have to rhyme always anyways,
so you should let out your feelings in a creative manner next time
i'm sure, if you make him a longer good sized poem with a sense of feeling, he would enjoy it
but it sounded more of a comment than a poem on the "but forever isn't good enough~~~". i liked the last line out of all.
sorry for my [creative] criticism, but I like to help people &&stuff on ratings ;D ~ 4/10

[BbbyBoy0000]

Nice POEM!