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so what your falling for me
well great i can say you died for me
i can say i pushed you to kill yourself
yeah your falling for me
and i am falling apart
why couldn't you just have killed me?
why did you have to jump?
and why the hell would you choose to fall for me!?!
do you hate me that much?
well i guess it doesn't matter now huh
your falling
i'm crumbling
and what?
what now?
where do you fall when you fall for someone
where do your pieces go when you crumble
what happens huh!?!?!
JUST TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!
- by mental angel |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/16/2009 |
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- Title: falling for me
- Artist: mental angel
- Description: i was contemplating the phrase "falling in love"
- Date: 07/16/2009
- Tags: falling
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Razzz25 - 07/16/2009
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It's a decent concept, but you lack rhythm...
It's just a string of words.
You need more poetic devices. - Report As Spam