will u notice me

• Artist: sheri-b
• Description: this is a poem and a song. i songwrite and play guitar! it is a true story from middle school in 7th grade. his name was demetri cutest boy in seventh grade.and he had dimples!!!
• Date: 07/21/2009
• Tags: will notice

i cant change the world,
but if i could,
id be the queen and,
id make you my king.

if i cut my hair,
if i change my clothes,
will u notice me?
if i bite my lip,
if i say hello,
will u notice me?
whats gonna take for you to see,
for you to notice me???

do u even know i exsist?
one more day with u,
is like a bliss.
dont we even have a math class together?
and science class we did,
a report on the weather.

if i cut my hair ,
if i change my clothes,
will you notice me?
if i bite my lip,
if i say hello,
will you notice me?
whats it gonna take,
for you to see?
for you to notice me??

if u see me walking,
through the halls,
will you notice me?
if i talk to your friend,
in a nasty growl,
will you notice me??
whats it gonna take,
for you to see?
i want you to notice me!!
*kissess*kissess* heart heart

sincerely,
sheri b

Comments

[MissPurple1998]

awww how sweet!!

[Jessy Bobagnoosh]

oooo love song yay

[Hadenshall]

I liked the chorus the most, and think you have a talent that you better not waste! I also write songs and play guitar (two of my songs are posted on here) and I tend to be quite picky when I read someones song. I try to read it with some kind of a beat, if not a tune, in my mind, and I think your reoccurring chorus has this quality. You did a good job with this, and I bet it sounds great. Keep up the good work!

Your fellow writer,
~Haden