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Blood
Key to life
Key to soul
Red in taintness
Leaks from my heart
Erasing past
Erasing sin
Bleed too little
It will poison
Bleed too much
You will be no more
Goodbye Blood
- by Kurokami Michiko |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/12/2009 |
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- Title: Taint Blood
- Artist: Kurokami Michiko
- Description: Something I just wrote rate and comment please.
- Date: 08/12/2009
- Tags: taint blood
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- Kurokami Michiko - 08/24/2009
- Thanks I'll change it
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- NeoBurley - 08/16/2009
- ok i love it very dark in a way i love cutters poems yet ok this line, Red in taintness Leaks from myself, sounds more like that time of the month than anything else change this please, i really like the bleeed to much and to little part, i see this in myself when i need to bleed out my life.. keep up the good work -neo mauh
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