wonders...

• Artist: lolikjujgesl43
• Description: i tried my best 2 write it....hope u like it :]:]:]
• Date: 08/22/2009
• Tags: wonders

wonders
sometimes it is hard
it'll be heartbreaking,angered,sadness
or other things.

you have no choice sometimes
if you wonder about bad things
you might choose the bad
or good side.

talk to a friend to cheer you up
you will be happy
but dont worry if you want
wonders are just wonders.

Comments

[Kelita44]

The poem sounds a bit like a long-winded blonde girl of about thirteen rambling breathlessly about nothing of any great consequence.

Also, please learn how to write. You really should capitalize and punctuate, but after reading just a couple of poems here on Gaia, it is obvious that skill is lost to the world.

Lastly, I thought you should know that I refuse to rate anyone, including yourself, any higher than a one unless there is at least an attempt at proper grammar.