Taken.

• Artist: CelesteShoz
• Description: Well, I wrote this the night that I found out my ex, was cheating on me with my bestfriend.
  I was basically just expressing how I felt at that very moment,
  and putting it into words.
  My friend told me to put it in here.. But I'm kind of nervous.
  I hope I get good comments.
• Date: 09/13/2009
• Tags: taken

If I looked him in the eyes,
Could he bear to break my heart?
Or would he leave me standing,
all alone, love yet to start.

The start, the very beginning,
when scarred skin once was clear.
Back when smiles came so easy,
and he begged to hold me near.

And then, just one step forward,
he asked of me, that deed.
My love for him unbearable,
I granted him his greed.

But then the greed grew stronger,
the deeds became much more.
Then he chose to leave me,
he left me bruised and sore.

I lost faith in all important,
pieces of my heart, that once was whole.
Because of a boy who chose to hurt me,
rather than returning the love he stole.

Comments

[The True Keyblader]

Very nice very awesome poem and you expressing it very well , give you a 5 stars

[ToxicAssassin21]

Very skillfully done, keep up the good work, aI hope you feel better soon ._.

[Leriat]

The best I've read here, so I gave you a five ^,~b