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"I Love You"
Those Secret words spoken through such sad lips.
The way they sound,
So cold.
So dead.
So unfeeling.
Those words, spoken that way, it could bring tears to the happiest person in the world.
Just by the way they travel through the air.
The three simplest yet so powerful words that are supposed to bring tears of happiness to the person who receives them.
But bring emotionless tears of pain and nothingness.
'I Love You'
Spoken so coldly, such beautiful words.
- by shinhwa380 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/22/2009 |
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Comments (2 Comments)
- ProfessorKC - 09/23/2009
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This image is great, but I do have to agree with Poika. A bit prosaic. not that it would yake much to bring it into the realm of good solid free verse. Separating the sentences up a bit might be all it needs.
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- UC Poika - 09/22/2009
- Too bad. Not poetry but interesting observation. Try it in paragraph form in non-fiction or fiction as a narrative. There is nothing wrong in narratives. Wish we had someone who would publish such things. They're great.
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