To save me.

• Artist: Tattered Faerie Wings
• Description: Nothing really special....just a random thing that poped into me head.
  enjoy!!
• Date: 11/23/2009
• Tags: save

Stay close,
Stay near,
Stay by my side,
Forever more.
To protect me from my fears,
To save me from the things that hide in the dark.
To save me from my nightmares.
Help me get over those days,
Way back when.
When the world was sill and beauitful.
Help me to love you.

Comments

[Sex_Addiction470]

i luvs it 5/5!

[luvnikiniki]

it is sooooo beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Evil Korona]

AWWWW is so beutifull!!! u rocks kayla!!!

[- E o - The Philosopher]

The feeling you're trying to express is very clear and you have a few nice images. I love the beginning with the repetition of the letter 's'. The only thing I can critique is the rhythm... its a little hard to catch.

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