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I stare at you from a distance,
watching you with your your beloved little rose.
Consintrating my resistance,
to the pain this site arose.
The darkest pain from deep within my heart,
slowly shatters my world apart.
This ache caused by you, I will never truly numb,
so soon now I will sleep,allowing my calming dreams to come.
The ones where you become my angel,
with your black wings, for my heartache thankfully they do repel.
But then as soon as I meet you, I wake with tear drops of falling rain,
apon my pillow they find themselves,for my angel stabed me again with the sword of pain.
You slowly drive me insane,
though you do not know,
of the reason for these tears of rain,
even if it is shown in site, so plain,
It's because I Love You So.
- by cutekitty018- |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/03/2010 |
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- Title: Impossible Love
- Artist: cutekitty018-
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Description:
I wrote this because I love some one but he is with some one else so i have to just be friends with him and it is hurting me alot and he doesn't know it so i pretend i'm fine to everything stays ok
plz rate and comment this is only the 2nd thing i have written i think and i want to know what people think of it
- Date: 01/03/2010
- Tags: impossible love
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Comments (5 Comments)
- kittyanimefreak - 12/02/2011
- this also happened to my friend, there is always better men out there but to be frank and harsh but you should of just told him you liked him to make him understand it's a bit pathetic to suffer in silence and it's actually not that big of a deal saying you love someone and people prefere honest people even though the chance of them being honest is proberlly the samexxx but its goodx smile
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- Zero Ember - 10/06/2010
- Nice Work, I really felt the pain like i was right there in the story. Bravo.
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- JayBabie628 - 01/10/2010
- LOVE IT! 5 STARS!
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- Poster_Candy - 01/04/2010
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My band and i would like to ask you for help: lyrics.
if this comment is on your entry that means your writting is liked.
Please pm this account, there is a reward.
~rock on~
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- Kathyann97 - 01/03/2010
- I loved it!! 5/5! i think alot of people can relate to this, and I like poems that i can relate to. good work
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