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So here's a toast
A recognition
A sweet and loud goodbye
Cheers to us
And what we did
Lets forget about all the lies
A shame it is
To say goodbye
To one who is so dear
But life goes on
And we'll forget because
Our futures are so near
I regret to say I'll miss you
And I resent to barely care
But I know someday it'll be just like you were never there
So goodbye my love and what we had
Lets try to do what's only fair
It's a shame to know that eventually I won't even truly care
- by xXHarunaXx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/14/2010 |
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- Title: A Shame
- Artist: xXHarunaXx
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- Date: 01/14/2010
- Tags: shame
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- sporosofyadah - 01/14/2010
- the last line is essentially the same as the second line of the second to last stanza. I'ld change that. Its not good repetition. that being said it's average but not in a bad way. 3/5
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