fallen

• Artist: is that a bear
• Description: just another something i wrote at school
• Date: 02/03/2010
• Tags: fallen star wings

you fell from heaven
on a shooting star
your wings were torn
but you stole my heart
you touched my face
kissed my hand
sweetly, softly
you found your wings again
i watched you take off
took a piece of my heart
you went back to heaven
and watch me fall apart

Comments

[is that a bear]

why thank you darlin! your such a sweetheart. remind me to give you an extra big hug next time i see you.

[Magiking]

Your line breaks are wonderful.
Each of them gives the reader a distinct image and feeling.
By the end of the poem, I was curious as to what would happen to this person who fell on the back of a star and the main character.