Fear Poem

• Artist: XxSplatter-ShatterxX
• Description: This is a poem I wrote as an assignment for school and I thought it was one of my better works so I figured I would post it in here.
• Date: 02/03/2010
• Tags: fear poem halloween

I go into the creepie house,
and I hear a squeaking mouse.

I walk into a candle lit room,
and feel as though my future is full of doom.

I am deffinately in a haunted place,
and then I start to quicken my pace.

I see Micheal Jackson doing the Thriller,
and make a mistake and think he's a killer.

I hear the phone ring and thing of One Missed Call,
and start running and screaming down the hall.

I open a door and see a mummy opening it's case,
and run right back out when I see it's face.

I run and run full of fear,
and then I shed a ghostly tear.

I run out of the house and start to scream,
when I wake up oh it's just a dream.

Comments

[Slinkenhofer]

its good, but no real sense of rythym. 3/5