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[i]Days come
Days go
The moon steals the sun
And the sun takes the snow.
Weeks go
Weeks come
Whispers travel
From mouths they come from.
Months come
Months go
Light turns quickly
To darkness that hides the foe.
Years go
Years come
Forever in dept
For the damage you have done.
Lives end
As lives begin so marry
Time is a burden
For us all to carry.
- Title: Our Greatest Burden
- Artist: Dephy
- Description: :) enjoy and tell me what u think
- Date: 03/27/2010
- Tags: time
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Dephy - 04/03/2010
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thanks ^.^
i should really spell check my work... - Report As Spam
- Sabaism - 04/02/2010
- You spelled "dept," but other then that I love it! :3
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- Dephy - 04/02/2010
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lol no i dont xP
if u put line 7&8 together it makes more sense:
Whispers travel from mouths they come from.
but yeah it looks a little odd lolz - Report As Spam
- kitharion - 04/01/2010
- line 8... i think you have an extra "from" xD 5/5
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