3 Tankas

• Artist: SilvertongueSagittarius
• Description: More NaPoWriMo stuff. For those of you who dont know, a tanka is like a haiku, but it's 31 syllables, arranged 5-7-5-7-7
  
• Date: 04/13/2010
• Tags: tankas

"To whom it concerns"
is an awful begining
for all poetry
that is, exept for this one
because this one is quite good

When you sing like that
I want to get my duct tape
because you lack skill
nor do you have the right voice
to sing such a lovely song

Originally,
I was going to write two
but Im having fun
So one more cant hurt, I guess
and this one might be the best

Comments

[SilvertongueSagittarius]

Sorry, I put up the rough draft. Fixed it now though

[Echo Ligeia]

Haha, I liked the first one, ironic. The others are ok; there are a few discrepancies in the syllable count, but that's still acceptable (a little variation's accepted, I think) . Try to really use your words wisely, as you have less than the average poem.