As We Kiss and Kill

• Artist: Keekii o Tabetai
• Description: This one has been waiting to come out for quite a while now. I know my English writing skills leave something to be desired, and looking at it a bit now, it is pretty cliche here and there. It was one of those poems that just flow out of me without me thinking about sentences more than 5 seconds. Honestly that is how my writing is at it's best. It's basically my raw emotions flowing out into writing.
• Date: 04/14/2010
• Tags: love pain desire

live life like a dream
and never wake up
bursting at the seam
hearts are corrupt

eyes like ice
wishing demise

face of lust
wishing trust

in the fire it burns
but nobody hurts
end now this search
love is a curse

butterflies of blood
kill her this sod
has she ever known
the ways of the grown

Comments

[Kay828]

SOORY BUT I CANT RELATE I WILL RATE ! MY SCORE IS 4/5

[Caesura Caelum]

I can relate, most of my poems i also write in the heat of the moment sufficing i have pen and paper with me or i can keep my thoughts long enough until i get them. Keep on, i like this one.

[Metaphoric Rain]

I like it a lot, though you're only looking at the nasty side of life. It's always good to look at the flipside of things; makes getting on with things a lot easier.
5/5. :3