what the heck?

• Artist: popsinger102
• Description: Not really a story,not really a poem.I have no idea what it is.Dont question the name please. I was bored. use constructive critisism,please.
• Date: 05/31/2010
• Tags: heck

'Lost
Found
Death
Birth
What are these to you?
If you were lost what would you do?
If you were found by a stranger what would you do?'
I had to answer these for someone.
They died at my sisters hands.
My friends and family and my own sanity, driven away by her anger.
My brother went away for a long time.
When he came back he was diffrent.
Not talking for a week to me.
He grabbed my arm and pushed me into a corner.
"Don't speak"
I left.
I died.
I was born.
I was lost.
I was found.
Everyone forgot about......

Comments

[popsinger102]

yesh..I ti nk i know what ur talking about but what i mean by it was a driven mad by my sister never again to be found within the depths of my own jungles.

[aiko_maiko]

i love the overall sense of one being crazy, however i think you need to be more clear about what this poem/story is about. on the other hand, there is a form of writing where a story is told without really saying much about it, your poem/story could fit in with this unique style.