To my love (comments please)

• Artist: koigirl
• Description: a simple sweet peom
• Date: 07/13/2010
• Tags: love

♥Roses are red
Violets are blue
I smile
I smile because i think of you

Sugar is sweet
Lemons are sour
For each second together
I wish this would last another hour

One is too little
Three is too much
Two is the perfect number
For couples and such

Snow is cold
Fire is hot
When we are not together
I miss you a lot

Tears are sowwor
Smiles are gentle
Love can make you crazy
It can make you mental

Peoms are short
Stories are long
I hope that one day
One day this becomes a song♥

Comments

[Tiggergirl22]

naa i like the repeating of "one day" and "i smile"
5/5 check out my poems?

[koigirl]

it was meant to be like the last 2 words starting the next line for that stanza

[2three4]

Really good poem. Only thing I found a bit strange was repeating "one day" twice. Aside from that, good job.

[babysara5]

great job! I love the end. smile