A Night Like None Other

• Artist: SalixNova
• Description: You tend to expect poems like this from me.
• Date: 08/06/2010
• Tags: night like other

I look to the stars
And to what do I see
A red crescent moon
Shining down upon me

Its richness consumes
Its shape mesmerizes
It takes a new form
Blood makes it change sizes

My grin it is crooked
My face it is shattered
My dagger be soaked
The red moon is quite flattered

It shines a bright crimson
Its shape now be round
My arm is now empty
All my blood on the ground

Comments

[ZombifiedCyber]

Very dark and very sad. But I must admit that I adore the way you have your grin. It gives it sort of a creepiness that I just love. I also love how you describe the moon. I'm a moon watcher and well, I love the moon. Very well done with this one. 5/5

[SapphireXSalazar222]

Sounds massively epic O.O

[Mr Glitter]

Looks like we have another Doctor Seuss on our hands. 5/5

[GinjaSmile]

i like it. it really makes u see what the person, "I", sees

[Cyntryli]

Great use of rhymes and rhythms. The poem is also detailed.