Invisible Me

• Artist: SentryDefiant
• Description: Hit a rough patch one day...tried to capture my feelings and this is what I got. I hope you all like it...no, it's not about suicide it's about destroying another side of my personality. Mind you there's a guitar part...but...I'll just shut up now.
• Date: 08/07/2010
• Tags: invisibleme

What are these things I've tried to hide?
Swimming, and turning they hurt me inside.
To believe in myself is what I've been told...
Then they turn their backs as their feelings turn cold.

Your love your hate just let it show.
How you feel just let me know.
Won't you please open your eyes and just try to see?
Or forever look past...invisible me.

A look of concern?
Oh can it be?
Just walk on past,
You don't see me.

I look at myself and what I've become.
A martyr for myself, and no where left to run.
I'll kill you you yet just wait and see.
I'll Kill you...invisible me.

Your love your hate just let it show.
How you feel just let me know.
Won't you please open your eyes and just try to see?
Or forever look past...invisible me.

(Repeat 5x) It all falls on me.

Comments

[MirandaAsh]

It's very good, dear. A good poet conveys the pain they are feeling. A great one makes YOU feel the pain as well. It pained me to read this, in a good way I suppose. You are an amazing writer. I love you.

[Mario the Davidic Hero]

very good! 5/5