Underneath a Willow

• Artist: O_o-Karstan-o_O
• Description: i was insanly bored and so i wrote this poem! It is just a short! SUPER SHORT love poem! so it can be taken in different ways! I wrote it thinking of God but take it however you like! XD
• Date: 11/06/2010
• Tags: underneath willow

Underneath a willows, my head on your chest like a pillow
i never want to leave this spot, but i know we must when the sun gets hot
the stars above are so bright, i never want to end this night
but the sun will come all the same, and i know the one to blame
but the person to blame you see, is the one that brought my love to me!

Comments

[Sentimental News]

I like it a lot, and I think it's cool that you could rhyme it so perfectly. Lots of people suck at rhyming but this was pretty good. I'mma give it a 5/5 actually. I wish it was a bit longer, but you deserve the 5.