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He stood there with a sad look on his face
That's when my heart started to race.
His words made me shiver,
My lips started to quiver.
I couln't believe what i was hearing.
O, how the pain was searing!
I ran down the stairs,
It just wasn't fair!
Away I go,
From the boy I once did know.
From the one who caused this terrible plight.
The one who made everything not alright.
I walk these halls pretending all is well
While on the inside the pain is beggining to swell.
I wear a fake smile
And have been for a while.
Will anyone learn what's wrong with me?
Probably not, I blend in too easily.
- by DemonicKitten2012 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/07/2010 |
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- Title: Break Up
- Artist: DemonicKitten2012
- Description: english assignment... we had to write a poem using one of the styles of one the cultures in The Hobbit.. i chose to do elvish...or maybe it's dwarvish because of the tone... hah i dont even know.. well i hope y'all like it anyway...btw his is only the second poem i have written in my entire life...
- Date: 11/07/2010
- Tags: brokenhearted breakup
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Comments (2 Comments)
- xbedlessx - 11/08/2010
- smile this is fantastic
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- maydaymouse - 11/07/2010
- It's pretty good, especially since it's the second one you've ever written! 5/5!
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