True Destiny

• Artist: Akanu Eir Nightmaris
• Description: the path etched into my soul
• Date: 12/18/2010
• Tags: destiny

When Darkness touches Light.
You will see right.
With blessed sight.
On this anceint night.
Darkness overcomes Light.

Comments

[Somebody Called Cheyenne]

I like it. Though, I don't want to seem rude, this is just from a writers view.
I think it could've been longer, if you had dug deeper and thought out your words more. I often write short thing's like this simply because I feel the need to write something. But when I think it out and search inside my mind, soul and body. I get a lot better stuff, better as in more intense, deep.
But, all together. I really like this, Four Stars.