- Take this knife out of my chest, I can't bear to feel these tears fall from my eyes like the rain that falls from the sky, I gave you my heart you gave me your promises, I gave you my love you gave me this pain that refuses to take its leave, now I feel like a dog waiting for someone to take him in but I know that unlike that dog you'll never come back, never repair this broken heart that you so dropped without a moment's thought, and you'll never be here to help me pick up the pieces but you will be here to watch me as I put this shattered heart back together with quivering lips, unsteady hands, and a shattered soul as these tears begin to form a puddle that will soon turn into an ocean of regret, filled with boats carrying nothing but the sorrow that will soon replace the blood pumping through my veins.
- Title: Unknown
- Artist: jing953
- Description: Couldn't figure out a title for this since I just write from my feelings (it's hard to put a label on something that you feel is un-nameable)
- Date: 01/22/2011
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- jing953 - 03/03/2011
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aww thanks you two ^^
i was too lazy to actually format it correctly (hence my not typing everything properly) - Report As Spam
- sangolover1 - 03/03/2011
- i love it smile and Deathbreak is correct it doesnt matter how u write it a poem is a poem btw i favorited it hehe
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- ForPosterityOnly - 02/23/2011
- It's your poem and you can format it however you damn feel.
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- Overworkedandunderpaid - 01/30/2011
- You need to format it like a poem, not a paraggraph. That's my qualm.
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