no title im not good with them

• Artist: When we die we mourn
• Description: just something i wrote when i iked a girl please critisize it but dont be too harsh im not a damn master poet
• Date: 03/29/2011
• Tags: poem love novice

eyes reopened.
heart repaired.
falling for you, should i even dare?
my walls surround me.
attempt to ground me,
but you make me not even care.
with one smile they erase.
dissapear before your loving face.
the world stops when im in your warm embrace...

Comments

[When we die we mourn]

simplicity is the most complex thing there is.

[Zlae]

It's cute, but very simple, etc, the words used for rhyming.