Emotionless Color

• Artist: animeemo1
• Description:
• Date: 10/14/2011
• Tags: emotionless color poetry

When the sky is grey
and your soul is blue,

And you're searching for someone to help you.
To raise your spirits up to the pink,

out of despiar, you hope you'll never sink.
Running through fields of green,

looking to be found, to be seen.
With clouds of white,

the morning's clear, you'll never be out of sight.
It's beaming on your skin, the sun of yellow,

waiting for someone to find you and say "Hello".
Fingering the roses bright, beautiful, and red,

waiting for someone else's beautiful words to be said.
The sun set, the moon out in the nightly purple,

looking for an end to it all.
Losing your mind searching for something in the dark of black,

It's an endless circle with no way back.
You clse your eyes: in your own world, there is no color.

Comments

[animeemo1]

btw im in 8th grade honors english -_-

[animeemo1]

well i did this last year and my typing skills..they could have been better, also, what i was trying to say throughout the poem was that before my world was filled with color even though it was still horrid. the i just let myself kinda fall...or "sink", and it was all just black, no emotion, no nothing.

[Alkalune]

I like the flow throughout most of it except for "you hope you'll never sink." and "waiting for someone to find you and say 'Hello'." Also, you misspelled circle. I don't really like the title either; "Emotionless" is a really overused word :S .. There's a lot of color through the whole thing and then just black. Interesting. I feel like there should be more of a transition though.. like a fading of the colors or disappearing into black?

[animeemo1]

thanks ^_^

[BloodVampireX]

i really like it!