Into Black Waters

• Artist: DeliciousMystery
• Description: Singing from the depths of the sea a song peirces through the water. A song of loneliness and of need of love from a young child.
• Date: 12/24/2011
• Tags: into

Cold stones gray and green
Slimy creatures of the sea
Bury me deep with my scar
Jade green tail waves sadly in the sea

A child about Fourteen
Songs of loneliness and greif
Rips through her soul
Waves of fury running cold

Ships crash oh sea storm blow
A boy fourteen floats down below
Tail limp and cold
Black waters swallow him whole

Comments

[Grace_DLG]

It needs some working on here and there, but overall, it's a good poem. 4/5

[DeliciousMystery]

yes i know i spelled grief wrong lol