Lonely Limbo

• Artist: Yusuke Candyman Kishi
• Description: Wrote this today, been crying all day today and this was all i could write in order to feel a little better. Please rate nicely and what-not it would be greatly appreciated.
• Date: 09/18/2012
• Tags: lonely love depression depressing poem

Broken
Spent
Worthless
Pointless

Is all that i am
Destroyed i stand
Alone and hurt
Enduring the illness of pain

Suffering until my lingering last breath
What did i do to deserve this?
Where did i go wrong?
Wheres my mercy?

I'm forgotten but cannot forget
I'm lost in plain sight
Loosing everything i've gained
The faint smell of death seemly fragrant

Descending into the state of vagrancy
There is no cure for this oblivion within me
There is no light in this gloom
There is no wake in this dream

I've strayed into this limbo
Is this hell?
Where am i?
Where am i heading?

Pondering about my uncertain future
As my lifes neglected
Ignored like a disease
While my heart becomes defunct

I've given away to much
I believed in a fraud
Theres nothing more to see
Theres nothing left to do

The deception of love
For it is what brought me to this low
It's worse then any pain i've felt
I cannot understand this abyss in my soul

Can you help me?
Can you hear me?
Am i all alone?...
Do i even belong?

I can no longer feel
I can no longer love
I can no longer live
My life ended before it even began...

Comments

[Yusuke Candyman Kishi]

Yeah i know this already i really don't care if people don't like it i just write what i can and post it simply to feel better and if people don't like it then oh well it doesn't bother me much, oh well thanks for your opinion and commenting

[nbetweener]

The more personal a piece is, the longer you should wait before posting it. I know lots about 'writing it out' - I just pounded out five or six poems earlier. We tend to be overprotective of works like these, as we know they did exactly what we needed them to, and therefore, improving them is impossible. Wait a week or so before posting, and then brace yourself...