Amnesia

• Artist: Robotic Jeana
• Description:
• Date: 04/12/2013
• Tags: amnesia

It feels
Like my head is
Submerged under
A pool of
Murky water.
Nothing is clear.
It's as if
I died
And woke up
With no recollection
Of what happened.
People tell me
Who I AM
Who I WAS
But is it TRUTH?
Is it LIES?
How can I tell
If my "so called friends"
Are taking advantage
Of me?
What if...?

...This is all a dream?

Comments

[Melodee Lee]

I can tell you're just a beginner with poetry. My advice, make your lines longer, and write something that truly means something to you. When you don't, this is the end result. 1/5