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Finished this poem last night
Fate by ace_smith01 (10/22/05)
When I wake up, I am trying
To find reasons for why I'm crying
Just these thoughts of me losing you
Are enough to make me run to you
When it's too much, I'm defying
All the logic worth denying
Comparing my life unto others
Is enough to make me wonder
What I'm missing, what I'm needing
Just to hold you, my heart's bleeding
-Can you mend the wounds, try to fix me
Could we break the rules, fill what's empty
Saying I love you yet it means nothing
You make it seem like I'm just bluffing
These fantasies of you being near
Quicken the fall of each crying tear
I could reach for you yet only grasp air
Is it too much to ask for you to be there?
I realize only now I'm living off of dreams
Because you're there, it's where I want to be
Forgive me for longing for you
It's the only feeling I thought was true






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Zero41389
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commentCommented on: Mon Oct 24, 2005 @ 04:02am
Very nice, I like the structure ^_^


commentCommented on: Tue Nov 08, 2005 @ 08:50pm
That was really............good 4laugh




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