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The black vines holding my arms and legs.
of shadows with their mocking faces.
They know The trees what is standing in front of me.
The black lips smiling weakly at me.
The gleam of a blade is all my eyes see.
The stab of my heart, the twist of a blade, the end of my life.
The vines retract slowly as I fall into a sea of red.
I lay in darkness as death lingers over my vessel.
The breath of life, no, death surges through my skin.
My eyes open slowly, my body rising to my knees.
The pain in my back, the sound of ripping flesh.
Wings, black as night and her’s, flapping slowly on my back.
I roar in anger as my eyes burn, my sight being flooded with red.
My fingers become silvery long tips, scratching at the dirt.
I rise slowly in a growl as the darkness releases from my lower back.
It waves back and forth, scales patterned perfectly and evenly.
I roar again at her, a hiss comes from her mouth, commanding me to fall and bow to her.
I turn away and ignore her, seeing what I had become.
A fiend of shadows, a soul of darkness, a demon.
I turn back slowly, looking into her eyes, reflecting what I had become.
Death had came for me and she gave me something more.
- by LloydIrvingofSymphonia |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Death Has Come For Me
- Artist: LloydIrvingofSymphonia
- Description: This is a small poem based off of one of my very first RPs on Gaia. It depicts the moment my slayer character has been defeatd by a demoness, in the RP, and being converted into a demon, reflecting his emotions and fears in the mood of the poem. I hope you enjoy it ^_^.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: death come
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Raspberry Muffin_xx - 07/23/2009
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Emo princess, poems don't have to written correctly.
Punctuation really dosn't matter.
A poem is art in words and you can't yell at Leonardo devinci for not making mona smile. Afterrall, what's to be happy about? wink 5/5 - Report As Spam
- AtalissaDreams - 07/09/2009
- aww!
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- ffcorkey - 04/22/2009
- make it rime smile
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- Follower_Of_Jashin - 03/24/2009
- deep.i actually had to think to understand it and that doesnt happen often.u deserve a 5.u definately earned it
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- xxxemo-princess666xxx - 02/03/2009
- not very poem like. poems shud b short n concise, u dnt wnt to write as if its a story, u wnt to get the point acros...u want to get rid of sum articles in it . ex:"The black lips smiling weakly at me," cud b jus "black lips smile at me weakly." u need to wrk on comas n punctuation. every line cnt end w/a period. n hw is this holiday like? its mor lik halloween (not tht i dnt love halloween). i thot ur vocab was excellent.if u fix those few mistakes i think itd b amazing. hope tht helped. 5/5
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- blackink12 - 12/28/2008
- wow. its amazing, u have some real talent. I really love it
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