A very dark day

• Artist: Invisible_ dark_soul_55
• Description: A little poem or story of a dark day I think would happen.
• Date: 10/12/2008
• Tags: very dark

stare A dark day will happen when were wolves and vampires and man eating mutans will roam the earth and not one mortal will survive. But I will survive and roam with the were wolves and hunt with vampires and feast on mortals with the mutants. A dark day a very dark day between april and may.

Comments

[-x- Fridge -x-]

Ok... 1. It's not a poem. You'd be better of posting in the Fiction section. 2. Don't use emoticons no matter where you are posting. 3. Come up with some more intersting words rather than reusing ''dark'' over and over again. It'll make the readers happy. and 4. Please, if you insist on posting in the poetry section, then please at least pretend to make some type of format. Thanks. Good luck next time.

[LittleMissNonaFaye]

Shhwwweeet!

[Puddlezinn Mudd]

Well, that was a very depressing.. um.. thing. not really much of a poem

[lnaouna]

your poem sucks crap and a**!

[King Exseada]

well i sorta like it.

[DeDrim]

...somehow...i like it..

[iorekbyrnison]

Fix the formatting and clearly state your message. Do you feel immortal? Does this necessarily have to be so gloom and doom for you to present that message. Sorry if it seems like I have flamed you, but I'm just trying to help.